We Believe in You
Short but to the point. maybe too short. still got a chuckle out of me
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We Believe in You
Short but to the point. maybe too short. still got a chuckle out of me
Action Action Action!!!
It was Action Packed to the rafters...... maybe
sick!
Great story and amazing ending hahaha!!
I don’t know if there is a game here I gave up after clicking for 10min. Your art is good I’m begging you to learn to pace this. Literally take your script and cut out 80% of it. It’s not bad, it’s too much. This needs to move faster for this format. Kill la Kill is like the fastest paced show ever you can’t take that premise and move at a snails pace. If it’s more than 3min of dialogue before I interact with the game then the pacing is too slow.
I've been scrolling through text for 5-10min. Have you considered shortening the length, just writing a book, or making something interactable... it is a game right? even visual novels have more to go on than this.
TLDR Poor Pacing
this kinda sucks, like the effort is really strong... but i'm not sure you know enough about people to make this game.
Oh..I will take into account all the comments. I may not be able to fix all the problems of this game, but in the next project I will try to make the relationships between the characters more harmonious and interesting. Thanks for the criticism!
Chefs kiss
I don’t know if something glitched on my end, but there’s no image
I love this style!! The way you find shapes for the shadow is so fun! It has almost a paper cut out feel to it. But for real the shapes are amazing.
Thank you!
Just finally starting to learn how to draw in my 30s. Hopefully I’ll make some progress
Age 34, Male
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Maine
Joined on 7/16/09