We Believe in You

Short but to the point. maybe too short. still got a chuckle out of me

Action Action Action!!!

It was Action Packed to the rafters...... maybe

sick!

Great story and amazing ending hahaha!!

Elf kingdom fights are still not working properly for hit boxes, gets very frustrating. Looks great for an early draft

I don’t know if there is a game here I gave up after clicking for 10min. Your art is good I’m begging you to learn to pace this. Literally take your script and cut out 80% of it. It’s not bad, it’s too much. This needs to move faster for this format. Kill la Kill is like the fastest paced show ever you can’t take that premise and move at a snails pace. If it’s more than 3min of dialogue before I interact with the game then the pacing is too slow.

I've been scrolling through text for 5-10min. Have you considered shortening the length, just writing a book, or making something interactable... it is a game right? even visual novels have more to go on than this.

TLDR Poor Pacing

Chefs kiss

I don’t know if something glitched on my end, but there’s no image

I love this style!! The way you find shapes for the shadow is so fun! It has almost a paper cut out feel to it. But for real the shapes are amazing.